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Dream

Something old I thought I'd post. 



Your eyes glitter like butterflies, speckled blue with the haunting memories of your past. Your presence in my life sparkles, shines through the dismal passing of the days. I try to change the world for you, to allow you happiness. Shimmering in this dreary place, you go unnoticed by those willing to waste their lives running in circles.
 
You’re not what you seem, there is so much more to you. Hidden behind the walls around your heart is a fascinating soul. You have no reason to hide, to shy away.
 
I must be dreaming, for nothing so lovely could exist in this place.

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shit_ness
Sep. 8th, 2008 01:35 am (UTC)
I really like ur writing...maybe cuz there are times tht I can relate to it so well. anyway I REALLY like this one =]
xstarxspikex
Sep. 8th, 2008 02:34 am (UTC)
*Hug* You get another. This time for making me feel giddy with happiness. I guess I'll definitely need to write some more.
paranoid_woman
Jan. 17th, 2009 08:22 pm (UTC)
This has so much meaning. I feel all intense and in love with this little piece. Every single sentence touched my soul. *g*

Great job!

And thanks for friending me, sweetie! *hugs*
xstarxspikex
Jan. 17th, 2009 10:38 pm (UTC)
THANK YOU SO MUCH. It is so reassuring to get positive feedback on something you made. I keep thinking on expanding it but.... every time I do, I end up thinking it will diminish the meaning of the piece.
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